Thursday 25 October 2012

What is the sun ? The sun is a flaming ball of fire. It is a hot potato. It is a hot red strawberry. It is a pink warm Christmas decoration floating in outer space. It is a boiling tamato floating in the field of brightness. It is a soccor ball that has been kicked into a dark place. By Ethan

2 comments:

  1. Dear Ethan,
    Goodness, gracious, great balls of fire! You have quite a list of metaphors!
    Sincerely,
    Ms. McLean

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  2. Hi Ethan
    You are a very talented boy in more ways than one! Well done I enjoyed reading your metaphors!
    From Mrs Laburn

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